This flash fiction walks the line between narrative and poetry. Told in verse, it immerses us in the aftermath of a crash and a brutal police encounter through one survivor’s fragmented memory.
Damn, this was intense 👌The way you wrote it so raw and unfiltered it really pulled me inFelt like I was right there, living through the crash and the aftermath
I had thought I might post a humorous comment. But then I read your story and I was sobered right out of it. I need to go start a fight with my husband.
Powerful piece
glad you enjoyed it!
the imagery in this is so profound. excellent work, as always.
this flash fiction was inspired by a true story… so yeah that’s why it feels more real. not my story tho
still invokes such strong emotions in my core. i feel it all through the lines.
That was the goal🙏
Damn, this was intense 👌The way you wrote it so raw and unfiltered it really pulled me inFelt like I was right there, living through the crash and the aftermath
Inspired by a true story Hema 🥲
Just not mine
😪
Wow, powerful story
thanks Tracy
Wow. Just...wow. I'm speechless. That was so...raw and real. I'd applaud but it feels wrong somehow. Masterfully written.
Oh my god. The rage I feel, the sorrow. The hatred. I can’t.
Thanks for reading Ilana🙏
So good!
Wowzers Was not prepared for that. Glad its not your story! But it is incredibly well-written. Looking forward to a chapter :)
I had thought I might post a humorous comment. But then I read your story and I was sobered right out of it. I need to go start a fight with my husband.